This is my feedback from my class for my College magazine. I read through it and i realized that I need more text on it because it is quite plain and it is not very interesting with just pictures. Also i need to make the mast head bolder so it is clearly seen at it is the first thing that the reader sees. Also, from the feedback, I've been told that it is a bit too basic so I need to add more to it to make it eye catching and interesting to read.
I will take this feedback on board for when i create my actual music magazine.
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