First Article

This is my first attempt of a magazine article.  It is very basic because I didn't have a computer at the time.  There is a lot that needs changing about it.  I could use images to show the reader who its about before they read it, i could add a 'slug' in the corner to show that it is an exclusive article, i also could add some subheads in there to break up the different topics that are being talked about in the article, I also could have put page numbers at the bottom of the pages.  I also need to use images with captions to show who its about and what is happening in the image.

This article could be improved now that I know more about what could be put into a magazine article and i will think about where I want certain text, sub heads and images for my music magazine.